Walt: write a narrative
Sports Camp: First Day
Yay! I’ve been waiting for this moment, the first day of Sports camp. Everyone was gossiping about Sports camp and they tried to hold their excitement.
You could see their shining smile on their faces when they were on the bus to leave for Totara Spring. Half an hour later....... All you could hear is “are we there yet?”, “What's taking so long?” “I’m hungry” and “What’s the time?” They were all impatient and exhausted. The bus driver took them somewhere to eat their snack but then there weren’t enough space. They shouted “I’m hungry!” “Can we eat now?” But then they had to wait for another few minutes or hours.
A few hours later.......... Finally! We here! It’s amazing! They were enthusiasm. G.I got out of the bus and took their bags or what they’ve brought and put it on the bench. It smells fresh. A few minutes later....... They started eating their snacks. Finally! After when they’ve eaten, G.I took their bags and the teachers showed where their dorms were and put everything inside. Some of G.I students wanted to rest and relax but they couldn’t, they had to go to the first game which is Cross Country.
Theme: Always eat before you go somewhere. Incase if you get hungry.
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