Saver

Walt: write a narrative

One day, the firefighters were having their break outside on the grass. “I wonder what’s going to happen today” Zack’s friends agreed. After they had their break they started to talk about something.

They started chatting. “What’s that smell?” “Sniff Sniff”. “Yeah, what is that smell?” “Sniff Sniff”  “It smells like something’s burning.” “I think it’s heading over there.” They all looked...... “I can see the heat steaming.” They quickly got up and and ran to the firefighters van.

Suddenly the steaming heat became a fire. “It’s getting bigger and bigger!” They prepared the hose. But then the fire started following the house. I looked out the window. “Its heading into that house!” Suddenly a girl who lives in that house all alone was looking out the window. “What’s that yellowish, orangish thing?” She rubbed her eyes to see if it was a dream. She looked again “Damn! It’s a fire!” She didn’t know what to do. She was panicking. First she got a big bag, she put all of her clothes, shoes, her phone, wallet, and her family photo.

BOOM! Zack smashed into her house. The women looked straight at him. “Get outside quickly!” She runs outside fast as the wind. The man checked to see if no one was left behind. After when he checked he runs outside quickly. The fire was coming..... CRACK! SIZZLE! The fire went inside the the house. The man and the women ran together and then the man told the women to get down to the floor. They were far away from the house though. The fire burned everything.... Then suddenly the fire was burning the gas.......... BOOM! SMASH! CRACK! The house exploded. The man and woman put their hands over their heads. Zack’s  friends looked outside and ran to him and the woman. “Are you ok?” “Yes! We’re fine!” The firefighters drove near the house and got the hose and sprayed the fire down. “You saved my life!” “Thank you!” “No problem”

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