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Friday, 6 September 2013

Cross Country

Walt: write a rap/poem

Cross Country

Running and jogging
Through the little kids and dodging
People are sprinting
Some childrens are sitting

Teachers are standing at the corner
Childrens are getting warmer
Their foreheads are full of sweat
Makes them red in the flesh

People running on the grass
Because there are people off task
Childrens having stitches
Some are snitchers

Slipping on the mud
When I fall I create a flood
My ankle is sore
I keep on looking at the floor

I can see the finish line
I am running out of time
Finished! I breathe in and out
The teachers shout

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey Salomah, I don't understand the part when you said "Some are snitchers" I do not find that related to the topic :/ . Your poem/rap is interesting because it has a lot of rhyming words. If you had to improve your poem/rap, what would you update?

Anonymous said...

Hi Salomah I really like you poem/rap it very interesting because it has rhyming word. How would you like to do another one.

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