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Friday, 21 June 2013

Mum Stepped ...

Walt: use better words

Mum Stepped ...

Mum stepped out of the aeroplane with Kyle and Stevie. When mum stepped out of the aeroplane she felt excited to go home. But Kyle and Stevie wasn’t excited to go home because they didn't want to come back.

While Mum, Kyle and Stevie stepped out of the aeroplane Mum she assumed and felt something was wrong. But then she kept on walking. The manager of the aeroplane was looking inside and out to see if the people were all out of the aeroplane. Suddenly the manager was looking at this random big black thing. The manager didn’t know what it was so he stood up and check what it was. Then the manager said “Oh! It’s a suitcase”. The manager didn’t know what to do with it and he wondered who suitcase it was. After a few minutes later Mum noticed that she left one of her suitcase in the aeroplane. She told her kids to “Stay here I’ll be back in 5 minutes”. Stevie said “Ok but be fast”. Kyle said “Ok”.

Mum looked at the aeroplane to see if the aeroplane was still there. Luckily the aeroplane was still there. Mum walked inside the aeroplane slowly. She saw that the manager took her suitcase. Mum said “Excuse me, thats my suitcase” The manager looked at Mum and said “Oh! Here you go” The manager delivered her suitcase back. “Thank you” said Mum. Then she stepped out of the aeroplane slowly and went straight to Kyle and Stevie.

Stevie saw mum walking, “Finally!” Shouted Stevie. “Where did you go?” Asked Kyle. “I went to get my suitcase in the aeroplane.” Answered Mum. “That tooked you so long.” Said Kyle. “Lets go back home now” When mum said that, Kyle and Stevie’s face weren’t happy. When ever mum looks at them they pretend to be happy.

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