Fireworks

Walt: 1.write a narrative

        2.Use words to paint the picture

        3.Use senses

“BOOM!” “BANG!” Alisi’s family blew the fireworks outside without her. Alisi is in the middle of a sweet night dream. In her dream the whole world was made of chocolates and candies.

“I’m going to eat that chocolate mountain!” Alisi jumped and she almost was about to land on the mountain..... “BOOM!” “BANG!” The fireworks interrupted her beautiful night dream.

Suddenly Alisi woke up, “BOOM!” “BANG!”

“What’s that noise?” she screamed.  A lisi was scared. She really wanted to go and see where that noise came from. But she was too lazy and she wanted to go back to sleep. At last she pushed herself out of bed.

“Why is it so quiet now?” Alisi asked. No one replied. Alisi thought her family was sleeping so she checked everywhere in the house.

“Is this some kind of joke?” Alisi bragged. No one answered back again.

“BOOM!” “BANG!” the noise came back again. Alisi looked out the window. All she saw was a  beautiful sparkles shining up in the air. Her eyes started to shine like the stars in the sky.

“Wow!, That’s amazing!” two minutes later there was a voice saying “I want a turn! I want a turn!” “That sounds like Ash!” whispered Alisi.  

Alisi went outside and there was her family.

“You didn’t wake me up, you didn’t even tell me you were going to do fireworks?” Alisi was mad. But luckily there were lots more left.

“YAY!” Shouted Alisi.

“Can I do that one please mum?” she pointed at the bunch of fireworks still left.

“Sure.” replied mum. Alisi grabbed a firework. She smiled happily. Her mum lit it up.

“Are you ready?” asked Ash. Alisi was scared that she might point the wrong way and burn something. But she didn’t.

“BOOM!” BANG!” The fireworks blewed.

“That’s so incredible!” shouted dad.

“BOOM! “BANG!” Another firework came out.

“Is it done?” asked Alisi to make sure it doesn’t hit anybody. Suddenly the smoke came out. “What is that smell?” Asked Ash.

“It’s the fireworks, duh?” “What else could it be?” Alisi replied.

“There’s still more fireworks kids!” their parents suggested.

“BOOM!” “BANG!” “BOOM!” “BANG!” They were all excited and happy but Alisi wanted to sleep again so she could continue her dream.

Theme: Don’t miss out on the fireworks.